@oceanandsnowdesign, I have a few thoughts, but this is by no means comprehensive.
1: Your connect with us section (the hover effect for the social icons) is just perfect. I guess this isn’t a suggestion. Just an observation of something I think is glorious.
2: The hero top links and the hero paragraph text are a little thin on non-retina displays. It’s not bad, but it’s not super crisp.
3: The lowercase “a” at the beginning of your hero H1 stands out, and the word service is blue, which might make some users think it’s a link when it’s not.
4:The featured project looks AWESOME. The text KIRTON’S LANDSCAPE MAINTENANCE, though, is nearly invisible.
5: Also in the featured section, the button slides up on hover. This looks awesome on the small social icons, but on a large button, it feels like the button is evading the mouse on hover. To see this behavior, hover near the bottom of the button and move your mouse horizontally alongside the bottom few pixels of the icon. It bounces everywhere because the button (and therefore the hover area) is moving up.
6: Your work looks GREAT. Especially Cerullo Performance Seating. Great design. It would be great if you could ask some or all of those clients for testimonials, or at the least, a quick quote you could throw under each of those. Not necessary, but recommendations/testimonials are a huge part of making new clients/site visitors feel safe engaging your services.
7: I’m not sure it’s necessary to explain that the hosting is on Webflow, and the phrasing is a bit odd. “Hosting on Webflow via their Tier 1 Content Delivery Network, Amazon Cloudfront and Fastly” makes it seem like their site is going to be hosted on three different things: (1) Webflow via their T1 CDN, (2) Amazon Cloudfront, and (3), Fastly. You explain what it IS but not what it DOES or WHY it’s important to the client. What about uptime? Speed? Why is that important to them? The WHY here is critical.
8: The “Add Webflows powerful CMS to any plan for only $10 per site” thing is pretty ambiguous. “Learn more” is okay, but why would a client click that? Are your clients all familiar with the ins and the outs of a CMS? If you’re going to keep it, add an apostrophe so it’s “Webflow’s” CMS and not “Webflows CMS.”
9: Your how customers feel section is great! But I’m not sure why it is where it is. Wouldn’t it make more sense to move it above pricing and below your recent projects? That way it’s like (1) intro/welcome, (2) here is a featured project, (3) here’s more of our work, (4) here’s what our clients have to say, (5) here’s what we charge, and (6) here’s how to get in touch with us!
10: Your Services section is just dynamite. LOVING the graphics.
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11: The connect with us text at the bottom also looks like a link–that’s the crazy thing about blue text. Website visitors can always mistake blue text for clickable links!