I’ve got two projects I’m working on here, not quite finished, need a critical perspective on them and would appreciate some honest thoughts.
The first is for someone that I’m working closely with on all of his branding / marketing material and strategy.
And this one is for myself, I’m currently in the process of refreshing my branding and updating everything which has taken a bit longer than anticipated. I’ve put together a holding page for whilst I’m developing the website. The copy isn’t set in stone, and I’m mainly looking for feedback on the aesthetics / usability.
Hi from Bristol! I really like the first one - colours and text animations are very nice and particle effects always look good to me! I’m not sure about the fonts and text positioning on your second site… Also the bg looks a bit too washed out to me. Only my opinion! Best regards - Kai